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December 30th :)






Models: Susana and Maggie

Taken in Portugal


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Critique by ~woodlandtaker Jan 22, 2013, 12:10:33 PM
I was drawn to this because i like the whole idea, but i think you can improve this shot by doing the following.
crop it so the left person is further to the right , making the left side smaller and given a comparatively bigger space on the right hand side.
also straighten out horizon, or give it a real tilt, so it does not look so accidental.
do you mind if i edit this and show you what i mean?
i think you can breath life into this by giving it more space, and boosting the contrast so lady on left is more stark against the highlights in the sea.
What do you think?
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*larryhoth Jan 23, 2013
Just has such a breezy and fun feel to it.
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*PeterLime Jan 24, 2013
We can feel it! :)

Thanks Larry for your comments
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*bobnery Jan 22, 2013  Professional Photographer
Great shot!!
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*PeterLime Jan 22, 2013
Glad you liked it Bob! :)

Thanks
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*bear48 Jan 22, 2013
sweet job
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*PeterLime Jan 22, 2013
Glad you liked it Bear :)
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~woodlandtaker Jan 22, 2013
this goes with the Critique i just wrote to show you what i meant - [link]
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*PeterLime Jan 22, 2013
Thanks Andy. Now, please remove it, you posted it with a larger size (1800x1200) and ith the download option active
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~woodlandtaker Jan 22, 2013
ok moody man - dont think anyone will download it!
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